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bcholmes
The Riverbed of the World
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2003-06-23 08:59 am (UTC)
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I just read the story all the way through.
I'm not much of a sci-fi reader, but I can't give you a critique from that point of view, but I liked how the story went back and forth between an objective perspective and an emotional, more inward-looking perspective.
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Date: 2003-06-23 08:59 am (UTC)I'm not much of a sci-fi reader, but I can't give you a critique from that point of view, but I liked how the story went back and forth between an objective perspective and an emotional, more inward-looking perspective.