you know, yeah, the bubbles in P2 are a bit uneven, and the lettering a bit thin-n-thick, but overall i really like this comic! the wood texture rocks, the change of angle works, P3 is visually funny to me too, i like the juxtaposition between the short, chunky executioner and the grrl, and the punch line is funny! it looks to me like you've made a lot of progress since you started doing this.
Re: More Cartooning Homework
Date: 2004-04-14 11:46 pm (UTC)